Friday, October27, 2006 — Tread Softly

I’ve nev­er been a big fan of William But­ler Yeats — from that peri­od, Ger­ard Man­ley Hop­kins is more to my taste — but this short poem pleas­es me. If you have ever been qui­et­ly, unselfish­ly and vul­ner­a­bly in love with anoth­er per­son, you will know that he has cap­tured the sen­sa­tion exactly.

He wish­es for the cloths of heaven
Had I the heav­ens’ embroi­dered cloths,
Enwrought with gold­en and sil­ver light,
The blue and the dim and the dark cloths
Of night and light and the half-light,
I would spread the cloths under your feet:
But I, being poor, have only my dreams;
I have spread my dreams under your feet;
Tread soft­ly, because you tread on my dreams.

No tedious cycles of his­to­ry, slough­ing beasts, or celtic blar­ney, here. Appar­ent­ly, Yeats occa­sion­al­ly stepped off the cos­mic mer­ry-go-round to feel some­thing in an ordi­nary way. Love is not a top­ic that poets of the twen­ti­eth cen­tu­ry han­dled well. Too plebian, I guess. And it takes courage.

[Adden­dum: A read­er informs me that Yeat’s poem is actu­ally reli­gious in nature, and not about love at all. He explained the ref­er­ences in the phras­ing that iden­tify it as actu­ally being about con­tri­tion, repen­tance and “hid­den evil”. *sigh* Why are poets attract­ed to such tedious non­sense? I guess it was to good to be true to think a twen­ti­eth cen­tury poet would be will­ing to address an issue that real­ly mat­ters, and requires real thought, rather than the end­less re-arrange­ment of inane reli­gious twaddle.]

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